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What is your 'catch'?

December 31st, 2007 (12:26 am)
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I suddenly began to wonder, while writing a smutty scene...

When I read an erotic scene, there are certain little details I like more than others. I bet everyone has those.

My favorite line, probably (in one form or another), is: "he pushed his thighs apart".
Thighs, legs... Lol, whatever, as long as the idea is there. I have no idea why I like that so much, and find it appealing. Maybe it is the idea of force and forcing, dominance and slightly unwilling submission, though this necessarily has nothing to do with non-con.

If I have to pick a "scene", that would have to be: rimming.
I don't know why. There is only that much you can write about it, but... *shrug*

What about YOU? What are your favorites?

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Posted by: When despair becomes violent. (violent_despair)
Posted at: December 30th, 2007 10:36 pm (UTC)

when it's written in a way so that you can actually picture it instead of thinking 'is that even possible?'

Posted by: Del Rion (del_rion)
Posted at: December 30th, 2007 10:39 pm (UTC)
Jared fire

Lol, yeah, that kind of writing is really neat. You don't have to think - you just read. And at one point you just are "huh, this is quite good" :P

Posted by: prfctdaze (prfctdaze)
Posted at: December 30th, 2007 11:11 pm (UTC)
nnnnngh by hxcfairy

I love sucking cock.

Er...I mean, I love to read about sucking cock :P

A little balls action is nice too ;)

BTW...This is a fantastic post!

Posted by: Del Rion (del_rion)
Posted at: December 30th, 2007 11:56 pm (UTC)
Jared - bound eyes can't see the truth

*CRACKS* Oh my god.... *keeps giggling incoherently*

It's almost two a.m. in here, so...

Okay... First of all... *starts laughing again* I'm trying to keep it down since my dog and brother are already sleeping... and my bro doesn't like to be awakened... *cough* okay... *takes a deep breath*

You like to suck dick. That's cool. *cracks just a little more*

And yeah, brilliant posts like these are born in the middle of a night when writing Letocest. Shit happens, they say :P

Posted by: I am a leaf on the wind.....watch how I soar... (nikki6)
Posted at: December 30th, 2007 11:55 pm (UTC)

I really get into BDSM now, I find that the whole helpless, getting worked over and forced with some begging really piques my interest. A little pain, a whole lot of pleasure...

But then, you know that don't you....LOL

Cheers!
Nik

Posted by: Del Rion (del_rion)
Posted at: December 30th, 2007 11:58 pm (UTC)
Evil is inborn

I DO know that... I'm just dreading the day when you really, really make me "suffer" from it. And we are not going to the whole "submission" thing, because I think that you know what I think about that... *pushes dirty, lovely, inspiring thoughts away*.

And since I know what kind of BDSM stories you prefer, I think I'll pass :P I like the mild ones XD

Posted by: I am a leaf on the wind.....watch how I soar... (nikki6)
Posted at: December 30th, 2007 11:59 pm (UTC)

Posted by: Del Rion (del_rion)
Posted at: December 31st, 2007 12:03 am (UTC)

Posted by: I am a leaf on the wind.....watch how I soar... (nikki6)
Posted at: December 31st, 2007 12:03 am (UTC)

Posted by: Del Rion (del_rion)
Posted at: December 31st, 2007 12:08 am (UTC)

Posted by: I am a leaf on the wind.....watch how I soar... (nikki6)
Posted at: December 31st, 2007 12:09 am (UTC)

Posted by: Del Rion (del_rion)
Posted at: December 31st, 2007 12:14 am (UTC)

Posted by: Charis (charisstoma)
Posted at: December 30th, 2007 11:58 pm (UTC)

'My favorite line, probably (in one form or another), is: "he pushed his thighs apart".' --- Oh yes, and probably for the reasons you state.

Sometimes the impersonal being bent over and taken without that person immediately knowing who is doing the forcing but the watching of the person's face as they are being taken/played with by the doer are big favorites.

Agreement too to --Having the scene painted in words so well that it bypasses vocabulary and projects the action immediately to the viewing screen of the mind.

Posted by: Del Rion (del_rion)
Posted at: December 31st, 2007 12:01 am (UTC)
Milo *thoughtful*

Maybe this is why I prefer reading a good, well-written story to a visual film/clip. Reading gives you liberties; it allows you to see the scene in the shades you want to be there, for you to read it the way you want... Of course you can do that to the visual thing too, but that requires more "bending", sorta. (Does it make sense? I should be sleeping, totally... :P)

Posted by: Charis (charisstoma)
Posted at: December 31st, 2007 12:21 am (UTC)

Posted by: Del Rion (del_rion)
Posted at: December 31st, 2007 12:32 am (UTC)

Posted by: yami_san77 (yami_san77)
Posted at: December 31st, 2007 01:12 am (UTC)
Dare to be love's fool

I really like teasing conversation during erotic scenes. Especially, for some reason, when the bottom is only slightly begging for the top to continue. I really have no idea why. And when the word "whimper" is used.

favorite scene? although the actual smut part is great, I <3 foreplay! and like I said teasing.

Posted by: Del Rion (del_rion)
Posted at: December 31st, 2007 08:42 am (UTC)
Jared fire

Teasing's always nice... especially when well done. When it doesn't stand out from the rest of the stuff, and doens't break the 'rhythm', then it's perfect, I agree.

And foreplay... :P Yeah. Can't go anywhere without that. Hih.

Posted by: darkestangelspn (darkestangelspn)
Posted at: December 31st, 2007 03:55 am (UTC)
jared and matt-blond hair

I love submissive bottoms, bitchy bottoms, kissing, thighs being spread, rimming, eating cum, non-con, foreplay, plot more than smut, PWP on occasion, pretty bottoms, bigger and/or stronger tops, humor, role-playing, ladies lingerie, and cock sucking, whimpering, purring, bruising, hair pulling...did I leave anything out? LOL!

Posted by: Del Rion (del_rion)
Posted at: December 31st, 2007 08:45 am (UTC)
Milo *smirk*

LMAO.

In other words: whatever they dish out your way, you'll probably like it. ^^

That's a good place to be, since almost every story has at least one of those things...

Posted by: ridiculously romantic (rromantic)
Posted at: December 31st, 2007 05:34 am (UTC)

OMG...

first of all, let me just say, del_rion, this is a brilliant post!

secondly... holy fuck, you guys don't ask for much, do you?! LMFAO darkestagnelspn, please tell me you don't read BJ fic (I'm assuming from your username), 'cause I’m not sure I’ll ever be writer-enough to satisfy you! LOL

as a fic-writer-wannabe I'm getting chills reading this post - and not in the good way! ;-) No pressure, huh...

I usually sit for hours trying to come up with new things for the characters to do (especially if it's in a series!), never mind not using "cock" as every second word in the fucking thing! there are only so many synonyms before it all becomes so repetitive that there is just no fucking way anyone can go all warm and fuzzy because it does ”Having the scene painted in words so well that it bypasses vocabulary and projects the action immediately to the viewing screen of the mind” (btw, beautifully put). Again, no pressure… *bites nails nervously*

thirdly… my fav? Oh, shit… if they do it raw… aaarrggghhhh… kills me, right there. my fantasty? to have BJ do it raw… and Brian is actually facing Justin, with all the emotional trimmings… oh, have mercy…

cool. I’m inspired, let me go and wrap up on the smut scenes I should have had done by yesterday already! LOL

Posted by: ridiculously romantic (rromantic)
Posted at: December 31st, 2007 06:20 am (UTC)

PS: okay if I post the same question in my LJ, and credit you for coming up (..uh..) with the idea?

Posted by: Del Rion (del_rion)
Posted at: December 31st, 2007 08:48 am (UTC)

Posted by: Del Rion (del_rion)
Posted at: December 31st, 2007 08:55 am (UTC)

Posted by: What a peculiar thing you are. (mmara)
Posted at: December 31st, 2007 09:18 am (UTC)

What are your favorites?
That would be rimming as well *lol* Can't explain it either. It's just... just so... *lol* *shakes head*

As for my line - that's hardest. Dunno. Or perhaps... "he bit his lower lip" *lol*

Posted by: Del Rion (del_rion)
Posted at: December 31st, 2007 10:50 am (UTC)

Biting lip is always good, since the other party of the scene can then rescue the said lip...

Posted by: What a peculiar thing you are. (mmara)
Posted at: December 31st, 2007 11:03 am (UTC)

Posted by: Del Rion (del_rion)
Posted at: December 31st, 2007 01:06 pm (UTC)

Posted by: What a peculiar thing you are. (mmara)
Posted at: December 31st, 2007 02:47 pm (UTC)

Posted by: Del Rion (del_rion)
Posted at: December 31st, 2007 10:40 pm (UTC)

Posted by: piru_cobain (piru_cobain)
Posted at: January 1st, 2008 04:31 am (UTC)
J_C_anime

Wow, this is an interesting post! ^^
I thought I was ready to comment here but then I realised I really couldn't decide! :P
So I ended up noticing that I like anything that shows utter passion... It is hard to explan, it can be anything that makes me feel that weird way. A great example could be this scene from ladyjackylfic's "Bible" of fics:

Colin didn’t sleep much that night, despite being exhausted. His mind raced, wondering if Francisco was all right, wondering if Jonathan would ever speak to him again, thinking about home. Jared’s warmth at his side kept him awake too, his hands occasionally straying over Colin’s bare skin, bringing him to tingling alertness just as he thought he might drift off.

Sometime shortly before morning, Colin was on top of him, kissing him, Jared’s arms locked around his flexing lower back. The faint light seeping in the windows lit the mirrors behind the bed, casting a soft glow over them, over Jared’s face. Colin’s breath was hitched, his mouth seeking Jared’s and swallowing his soft moans.

“Do you feel that?” Jared whispered, his fingers stroking over Colin’s cheek, tracing his parted lips. Jared’s eyelids were heavy, his eyes darkened in the shadows behind them. Colin didn’t need to ask him what he meant, he just nodded, the feeling inside him overwhelming the ability to speak. It seemed to grow and expand, until it was consuming all of him. It was the reason he had feared it so much, because he knew it would eat him alive.

Afterwards in the buzzing aftermath, sweat-damp and hot against each other, Colin swallowed hard, feeling like he had just come through some barrier into a different plane.

“You all right?” Jared’s fingers trailed slowly along his jaw.

“No,” Colin whispered. “I’m fucking scared to death.”

“I know,” Jared’s breath was warm against his neck. “You don’t have to change who you are though.”

“I already have.”


Gah! O.o It kills me every single time.
Okay, well... any smut scene written by this wonderful author. ^^

Also, I like sentences that show how much they are really enjoying sex and reaching their climax, like "painfully beautiful face", for example.
As for a scene, I like that it involves a liiiiiiittle pain... *sighs* My masochistic side... :P Some nailing... Some biting...
I got so lost thinking about fics for this commment that I almost forgot the point here... did what I said make any sense? xD

Posted by: Del Rion (del_rion)
Posted at: January 1st, 2008 06:33 am (UTC)

LOL! Even if nothing you said would have made any sense, that's ok; You cited Morocco-series here, and that makes it all acceptable!

And really, I think that when you like a lot of things (and aren't picky like me when it comes to liking a scene :P) then it's hard to single out one or two things you especially like.

Posted by: piru_cobain (piru_cobain)
Posted at: January 1st, 2008 07:08 am (UTC)

Posted by: fallout_robin (fallout_robin)
Posted at: January 11th, 2008 10:06 pm (UTC)

I agree with the others - brilliant post.

well, I like them to suffer...
I drooled into by former boyfriend's lap when we watched "Pirates of the Caribbean 2" - the scene in which Will Turner is whipped by his father. I do not understand why my guy didn't let me watch that scene again, when I asked him to rewind the tape, hmmm.
then I had a frightening experience in the cinema: it really scared the shit out of me when I was turned on by the execution scene in "Lonely Hearts", Jared bound to the electric chair, jerking and finally wetting himself

whimpering is always good. I also like it sticky - coming in their pants, for example

finger-fucks are hot, too, especially in combination with voyeurism.
I just have a scene in mind of a naked Jared bound to a table in a backstage room of a high society night club, finger fucked by a stranger in front of an audience of businessmen in Armani suits who are paying for the show...

and I like old, nasty guys on top of hot, young boys, like Parmenion/Hephaistion non-con.
God, I guess I'm a real sick fuck, but I think I realize now that it's mostly about humiliation. what does that say about me? Think it's time to analyze myself again...


(wow, my first comment in months... you made me wanna communicate, congrats...)

Posted by: Del Rion (del_rion)
Posted at: January 12th, 2008 08:39 am (UTC)
Jared 1

Oh wow (o.o) *stares*
...
*stares a bit more*

If we talk about sick fucks here... I have no idea WHY, but the scene with Will and his father is great. I have no idea, either, why I would like to read fics of them in an incestuous relationship.... *tries to shake the idea go away* I have enough trouble with my Will/Barbossa and Will/Davy Jones fixation...

And that scene you put in my mind, about Jared bound and finger-fucked... could you please erase that? (I want to see someone write it right about NOW.... geesh... you're such a bad person :P)

Not to speak of Hephaistion and Parmenion - or any other older man - with the slight air of non-con... *shudders*

Seems like we have a lot of things in common that we like (though I'm not that certain about the scene in "Lonely Hearts..." oh well, we can't agree on everything :P)

Anyway, I hope you enjoyed commenting, and in case I end up writing something slutty Jared related, it's all YOUR fault! XD

Posted by: fallout_robin (fallout_robin)
Posted at: January 13th, 2008 11:27 am (UTC)

Posted by: Del Rion (del_rion)
Posted at: January 13th, 2008 11:49 am (UTC)

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