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Title: Sounds

Author: Del Rion (delrion.mail (at) gmail.com)

Fandom: Heroes

Era: Future, post-Heroes

Genre: AU, angst, drama

Rating: T / FRT

Characters: Peter Petrelli, Sylar (, Arthur Petrelli)

Summary: Sylar is getting tired of the silence – among other things.
A companion piece to “Deep Sleep”. Complete.

Written for: Heroes_Contest’s (heroes_contest) Drabble Challenge 15: Sound

Warnings: Implied violence, death, mass destruction, post-apocalypse. Spoilers for season 1-3, especially season 3.

Beta: Mythra (mythras_fire)

Disclaimer: The show, its characters, its places, and everything else belong to Tim Kring and other respective creators and owners of ‘Heroes’. I have made no profit by writing this story, and make no claim over the show.

Feedback: Much appreciated.


About Sounds: After various people pleaded for a sequel to my story “Deep Sleep”, a few ideas popped into my head. One of them is this: how Sylar saw the entire situation portrayed in that story?

I assume it makes sense to read “Deep Sleep” first so that you know where some of these thoughts are coming from; after all, this challenge had a 500 words max limitation, so there is no room for elaboration.


Story and status: Below you see the writing process of the story. If there is no text after the title, then it is finished and checked. Possible updates shall be marked after the title.

Sounds



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Written for Heroes_Contest’s Drabble Challenge 15 (Sound).
A companion piece to my other fic “Deep Sleep”.





Sounds



With years of silence, death, and decay surrounding him, Sylar sometimes wondered if he had become deaf. He often thought of the riddle: “If a tree falls in a forest and no one is around to hear it, does it make a sound?” Sometimes he shouted, just to hear his own voice, or tossed a rock down a cliff to listen to its echo.

When he went to the coast he could hear the sea, but he had never really liked it there. The violent shift of the San Andreas Fault had washed away most of what used to be California, and there wasn’t much to see. Rather, he spent his days floating high in the air, gazing upon the destruction he’d helped cause to this world. It didn’t fill him with pride, but it was sort of amusing.

It was hard to admit he was lonely. The US Army watched their side of the Ravine like jealous dogs, and while Sylar could get past them, he couldn’t be bothered.

So he dwelled in his silent world, starving until his regenerating body forgot what being hungry was like.

He often thought of Peter. How the other had sunk so low, he had no idea. One day he would break free because no man could withstand slavery like that if they had the power to break it.

But years passed, and Sylar’s annoyance towards Peter grew. The longer he spent silent hours sitting on the edge of the Ravine, looking into its dark, burned depth, the more he compared his life with Peter’s.

Peter lived in a world of sounds: the constant noise of his thoughts as he tried to find a way to please everyone, and the conscience that overruled his actions and made him weak.

Sylar had a few voices of his own, mainly the one nagging at him to get more power. Peter had had it for a while too, but he had handled the Hunger so poorly that Sylar was glad Arthur had taken it away from his son before he could do any real damage with it.

Nevertheless Peter had power, just like him. The difference was that the other man had become a puppet to his guilt, and in his attempt to save what was left of the world he had forgotten how to live.

Sylar was getting tired of waiting for him to come to his senses.

- - -

He half expected the sound of the metal spike sliding out of Peter’s head to be like the one he made when he cut someone’s head open. But it was softer, almost nonexistent and unimportant, and he strained to hear it. After all, this was an excellent, meaningful moment.

Sylar could hear him come back to life; his heart starting to beat, blood rushing through his veins, brain damage healing, and the scalp mending itself. Then came thoughts, and he knew Peter would soon be awake.





The End

Comments

Posted by: kirara3345 (kirara3345)
Posted at: July 2nd, 2009 02:08 pm (UTC)

This story made me consider about what it's like for the beings like Sylar or Peter. In this story Sylar's situation was beyond imagination. Utter loneliness. Absolute solitude. Why on earth could Sylar carry on so long without going insane? Or thinking about Peter made him keep his sanity?

Your description about the sound of the metal spike sliding out of Peter's head was really beautiful. I love this part;

Sylar could hear him come back to life; his heart starting to beat, blood rushing through his veins, brain damage healing, and the scalp mending itself. Then came thoughts, and he knew Peter would soon be awake.

Beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing this exquisite piece of art with us. And congratulations for the 1st place for the "Release" challenge!

Posted by: Del Rion (del_rion)
Posted at: July 2nd, 2009 02:31 pm (UTC)
Milo alone

Sylar's always been a little... erratic. But since he got almost half the country under his control, maybe it was worth a little silence and loneliness? Who knows why he really kept to himself... maybe he took up knitting or collecting rocks XD

Glad you liked the story. Hopefully it matched the feeling of "Deep Sleep" - and I hope that the sequel to these two, "Enemy Within", will also carry out the "legacy", so to speak.

And thank you! I kinda thought I might do well on "Release" if anyone bothered to vote... ;) But you never know about these things. *applauds for all the voters who cared to participate*

Posted by: Teh Michelle (rtwofan)
Posted at: July 2nd, 2009 04:15 pm (UTC)

An awesome companion piece. It matched the tone of "Deep Sleep" perfectly. And I'm so excited for the sequel, that you mentioned in an above comment! This sandbox you've made is so fascinating, and I can't get enough.

Posted by: Del Rion (del_rion)
Posted at: July 2nd, 2009 04:44 pm (UTC)
Milo 4

Oh, thank you ^^

I'm glad the two fics sounded alike, although the word count was slightly different.

I was actually thinking of first giving this idea for someone to grab at heroes_sandbox, but in the end I did it myself. Spared me the trouble of thinking about something else for the newest heroes_contest challenge ;P

Also, yes, I hope the sequel turns out okay. No idea when I actually sit down to write it since I think I ought to start working on my heroes_bigboom fic... It doesn't write itself, as much as I hope for it XD

Thank you for your comment! *squishes*

Posted by: eternal_moonie (eternal_moonie)
Posted at: July 3rd, 2009 12:07 pm (UTC)

I totally love it!!!!

Posted by: Del Rion (del_rion)
Posted at: July 3rd, 2009 12:36 pm (UTC)
Milo 4

Thanks ^^

Posted by: zagethe (zagethe)
Posted at: July 9th, 2009 04:40 pm (UTC)
Well done.

Deep Sleep was one of my faves. I only recently became a Heroes (and Sylar fan) so I've been looking for all the good FF I can find.

Posted by: Del Rion (del_rion)
Posted at: July 9th, 2009 04:48 pm (UTC)
Re: Well done.
Peter Petrelli 3 (red tilt)

Glad you liked!

I feel like a late bloomer too... started watching Heroes when season 1 had already ended. I've been a Peter fan from the start. Sylar... well, he's cool enough :D

Hopefully you'll find good fics to read! There are many of those around in this fandom.

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Posted by: Del Rion (del_rion)
Posted at: November 28th, 2009 11:06 am (UTC)
Peter Petrelli 23 (burning tree)

I'm happy that you're happy XD
Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed, as always.

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